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Roadmap of my Life by ~Inconspicuous54:iconInconspicuous54:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open




Turn left at my conscience.
Go straight when you’re at my door.
Turn around if you see my failures,
’Cause I don't live there anymore.
©2005-2010 ~Inconspicuous54
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i may add more to this later, but this little bit in and of itself pleases me and says all that needs be said. any more and it would be overburdened.
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~silly-lil-bint Jun 11, 2005, 11:58:28 PM
Best things come in small packages. Well done. :hug:

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When you want to give up and your heart's about to break, remember everyones perfect God makes no mistakes.

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~Sad-Sharkie Jun 12, 2005, 12:00:01 AM
I like it alot. I need to check it to see if you added more to it.

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... and a heart forever remains broken and lost, it's blood flowing into an abysmal pool, wondering whatever did the pain cost?

*Emotional-Writings
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~t7412j Jun 12, 2005, 12:29:14 AM
nice little piece of work....like it....^_^

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Live like you'd die tomorrow. Dream like you'd live forever.

"Bugger off, will ya, mate?" - Me
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~Blytz Jun 12, 2005, 7:50:42 AM
It all seems to fit so nicely. Some short poems don't work out as well, good job Evan :)

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"They tell me not to give in to love; that in the end someone gets hurt. But they forgot that love is e.n.d.l.e.s.s.."

I am the silencer of the grumbling tummies.
Believe it.
It's true.
:)
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!RebeccaA Jun 13, 2005, 11:44:05 PM
You pack quite a lot inito a few short words. This piece works on several levels. You should try writing Haiku.

My compliments;)
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~hark-the-raven Jun 15, 2005, 9:07:56 PM
you are very good at writing this style of poetry...i'm not sure what to call it...it's new...so we should think of a name...just us...

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"I see you picture, I smell your skin on the empty pilllow next to mine...You have only been gone ten days, but already I'm wasting away...I know i'll see you again whether far or soon, but I need you to know that I care and I miss you." ~incubus
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=reddhedds Jun 20, 2005, 7:35:04 AM
oo, me likes :D

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Click the [link] and feed a hungry person today, you won't regret it
I mean, come on! It's free!

ברוך אלהינו
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~serendipity04 Jun 22, 2005, 1:23:39 PM
aww that's awesome :clap:

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leave the politics to madmen
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